Can Someone Review My Lander (12)

Can someone please take a look at my simple lander and make some suggestions and critique it before I go live

http://nueskincare.com/pc/

I find the testimonials too hard to read. Concept is good though.
Text in first paragraph awkwardly placed.

Where is your ftc disclaimer?

Originally Posted by Daksneezian

Text in first paragraph awkwardly placed.

Where is your ftc disclaimer?

- Add some scarcity (quantity or time)
- Use more colors ! (Headline, benefits)
- The font size of the reviews is too small
- Use a bullet point list for the benefits
- Put the button above the customer reviews.
- Make the button stand out more (orange/yellow)
- Apply the Life Force 8 (http://finchsells.com/2010/07/05/man...inancial-gain/)
- This URL (http://zacjohnson.com/create-killer-...free-template/) contains a nice example of a bullet point list, strong headline, etc ...

Thanks everyone for the suggestion, exactly what I needed

What abcd said is good. Bullets would help a lot

I went to take a look so I could give some feedback but the folder is empty now. If you want to update the url I'd be happy to give you my two cents.

Originally Posted by z6marketing

I went to take a look so I could give some feedback but the folder is empty now. If you want to update the url I'd be happy to give you my two cents.

Too much image compression. Whether or not that actually affects conversions or not I have no idea. It just looks bad.

People are idiots. Tell them exactly what you want, like "Click Here".

The second one is definitely easier to read than the first. I would personally change the color of the button to something that contrasts with the background a little more. That blends in a bit at first glance, at least to me, and doesn't really draw the eye to it. You may want to truncate the customer reviews and make the text bigger. By that I mean increase font size and only show part of the review, like how they do it in the paper when talking about movies. They're a little hard to read right now. This way it still gives the whole social proof and positive review aspect but it's legible. The wall of text and the hard to read font (at least on my monitor which I guess is at a higher resolution) makes me not even want to read them.

Aside from that I don't think its a bad start. Don't forget that FTC Disclaimer.

Originally Posted by convinceme

Too much image compression. Whether or not that actually affects conversions or not I have no idea. It just looks bad.

Originally Posted by z6marketing

The second one is definitely easier to read than the first. I would personally change the color of the button to something that contrasts with the background a little more. That blends in a bit at first glance, at least to me, and doesn't really draw the eye to it. You may want to truncate the customer reviews and make the text bigger. By that I mean increase font size and only show part of the review, like how they do it in the paper when talking about movies. They're a little hard to read right now. This way it still gives the whole social proof and positive review aspect but it's legible. The wall of text and the hard to read font (at least on my monitor which I guess is at a higher resolution) makes me not even want to read them.

Aside from that I don't think its a bad start. Don't forget that FTC Disclaimer.

Its an image so if your going with ppv, which im assuming then your ctr will hurt. Images take forever to load, and assuming your not on a super fast server, probably will take a few seconds which people will just delete.. als the image resolution is crappy, doesnt look very nice at all...