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01-30-2013 01:52 AM #1 pascalos (Member)
lol ...worst ctr ever record inside ....

i beat the worst ctr record ever!!!

fb dating of course ...

i must be doing something totally wrong !

0,005% !!!!!!! beat it !


now here is the ad !

Tell me what to improve !! (i assume there is something to imporve lol !)


01-30-2013 01:57 AM #2 darkforces (Member)

Firstly that image is waaaaay too dark, no one is gonna click on that. Check this thread for the types of images you need to use

http://stmforum.com/forum/showthread...acebook-Images

Also your grammar is wrong. It should be "Are you searching for Love?"


01-30-2013 02:21 AM #3 pascalos (Member)

Quote Originally Posted by darkforces View Post
Firstly that image is waaaaay too dark, no one is gonna click on that. Check this thread for the types of images you need to use


Also your grammar is wrong. It should be "Are you searching for Love?"
thx for the answer ..so more clarity ... will check grammar too ( as you may know my english is not my first language lol )

note:the image come from the second post of this thread

http://stmforum.com/forum/showthread...acebook-Images


01-30-2013 02:22 AM #4 pokersensei (Member)

Also even if you had correct grammar, your headline is not going to work. Men won't respond to appeals for love.


01-30-2013 02:49 AM #5 pascalos (Member)

Quote Originally Posted by pokersensei View Post
Also even if you had correct grammar, your headline is not going to work. Men won't respond to appeals for love.
can you say more ...im a romantic guy ....


01-30-2013 02:51 AM #6 doryphoros (Member)

Bad image. Guys aren't looking for love, go with something between "looking for love" and "get your dick wet"


01-30-2013 02:55 AM #7 pascalos (Member)

Quote Originally Posted by doryphoros View Post
Bad image. Guys aren't looking for love, go with something between "looking for love" and "get your dick wet"
thx ..but can you elaborate more by "bad image"


01-30-2013 03:18 AM #8 pokersensei (Member)

Quote Originally Posted by pascalos View Post
can you say more ...im a romantic guy ....
Think more sex than love. Of course you need to be subtle about how you say it.


01-30-2013 03:27 AM #9 pascalos (Member)

Quote Originally Posted by pokersensei View Post
Think more sex than love. Of course you need to be subtle about how you say it.
sex ... subtle ... starting to see the light ...


01-30-2013 03:30 AM #10 doryphoros (Member)

Quote Originally Posted by pascalos View Post
thx ..but can you elaborate more by "bad image"

First, you can hardly even see the girl. All you really see is a red border and a pair of eyes, the rest is pretty much gray. She looks like she just got sucked out the airlock of a spaceship and her skin is turning blue and her eyes are about to pop out of their sockets from the vacuum of space. (sorry been watching scifi lately...)

You need to be trying to catch people's attention with your pic, not blend into the background...tha'ts what getting CTR is all about. At best, with a PERFECT ad, only a fraction of a percentage of people will actually notice your ad. The creative is pretty much the whole ad. You're not doing yourself any favors by blending in with a gray pic.

Take a look at this thread, and figure out what it is about all these pics that makes them successful. They're all bright, they're all "vivid", like they imply motion or speech or something. The pic you're using is in there, but compare this one to yours.

http://stmforum.com/forum/showthread...acebook-Images




01-30-2013 03:44 AM #11 thomasbhm (Member)

I would avoid grabbing the images from that thread in favor of just reading it. Lots of good tips, but I've tried those images and they didn't work for me at all. Maybe others have had better luck. I even got the girl #3 approved w/ the huge ummm sunglasses and she didn't convert for me.

Also I would like to point out that your headline says "Are you looking for love" but you targeted #casual sex as an interest. Those two kind of contradict each other.


01-30-2013 06:42 PM #12 darkforces (Member)

Study in depth what others are doing. Use their ideas as inspiration and eventually it will become 2nd nature to you the kind of ad copy and images that will work. Just takes plenty of practice.


01-31-2013 01:58 AM #13 pascalos (Member)

thx to all ....

can someone answer another question :


does the ad with the biggest cpm get show in first (higher in ad column) or does it only influence the volume ?


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