Need Critiqui For My landing page (17)
Hello
I need your critique for my landing page. I use it, for dating offer mate1.com. My ads with this LP still pending aproval on pof. Next, I'll be post the result.
template : benaughty
text : from searching this forum
Boca Raton's hottest.
7 days
You targeting males or females with this? If it's males, why use a pic of a couple? Use a pic of a chick with cleavage biting her lip or something.
Originally Posted by doryphoros
My target offer is males
I've not change a background pic of a couple. I'll change it
result :
budget : $50
CTR : 0.052
CR : 4.50
I only get 1 convertion
Anyone can help me?
Whats your bid? You need to get your CTR up. Find and test more/better pics.
Whats the LP CTR? Conv rate?
Need more info
Are you split-testing this lander against something completely different? If not, I'd advise doing that. You can tweak later - for now, try two or three MASSIVELY different landers, and see what works best.
Thumbs up for caurman. Gotta split test to compare. Post your stat if you do so
Fully agree with caurman...
I really like your headline if your targeting women only.
and do what caurmen and dory said, always make 3-4 landing pages that are different. Then see which is the best, then make a few variations of that!
Just making 1 landing page won't tell you anything. Youll see this when you test 3-4 landing pages and one get 8% CVR and one gets 30%. You'll then know how important split testing is
Originally Posted by 2modest
I've not testing my LP friend, and I only got 1 conversion
thanks for advice friend
Originally Posted by caurmen
thanks for advice friend
Originally Posted by alice_cd
Originally Posted by stackman
I'm being split testing my lp. next, I'll post the result
thanks for advice
I've been split testing my LP, only 2 pages
but with these page, I'm not getting any conversion 
visitor : 127
A : 50
B : 77
Coversion : 0
CR : 0%
What should I do, so I get a good conversion 
I need your advice, thanks
What CTR are each of the landers getting?
Originally Posted by caurmen
sory for longest time to reply. I'm not looking ctr at my unbounce page, I see just CR and vistor
can you help me?
Offer expires in "7 days" isn't gonna cut it. def need more urgency than that.
I would also invest in cpvlab if you plan on making this a full-time business. Unbounce may be ok for landers but it has nowhere near the tracking capabilities you need to make money in super competitive markets like dating
Yep. I wouldn't necessarily recommend CPVLab - Prosper 202 is a decent alternative - but you'll need to use some better tracking software than Unbounce provides.
At this point, I'd strongly suggest that a good move would be to invest in a Virtual Private Server for your affiliate marketing, and install one of the industry-standard tracking packages. The Starter package from Beyond Hosting is a good deal, and there's a 50% money off voucher for Stack That Money members.
Once you've got a server, install the tracking software Prosper 202 on it - or CPVLab if you decide to buy that - and run your landing pages through it. That'll give you a lot more detailed and precise information on the stuff that you need to know to make your campaigns work.
This probably sounds like quite a lot of hassle - but it's necessary at some stage in your affiliate marketing career, and will really help you get your campaigns off the ground.
If you have any problems, PM me or post on the forums and we'll get you sorted out!
Bevomedia is a great free alternative that I've been using. Its hosted on their servers so you don't need a VPN or worry about installation issues!
The pro affiliate marketers can chime in to correct me if I'm wrong 
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