Here is my lander i am using atm http://www.evernote.com/shard/s280/s...745830b9d672a3
I read in the ad guidelines facebook don't like arrows, and aggressive calls to action, and videos that autoplay, so I'm looking to avoid coming of to tame.
Try adding images of some muscular people behind the text but make it kind of transparent if you know what i mean
I'd suggest going for a white background with black text. Test have shown that white text w/ a black background are harder for visitors to read, unless of course you split tested this and found this to be a good combo. You could also have a clear headline, you kinda just right into the sale without grabbing their attention first.