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Help: Whats wrong with my lander? (12)


12-29-2011 10:20 AM #1 presfox (Member)
Help: Whats wrong with my lander?

Started PPV campaign with CoReg yesterday, got 500 views according to prosper, with just a single email submit.

Any tips, comments etc would be appreciated:

http://www.cooking.jrtuxi.com/1/offer.php


12-29-2011 10:26 AM #2 m0thm4n (Member)

What were you targeting? Was just the cooking.com website or was it more broad?


12-29-2011 10:31 AM #3 presfox (Member)

cooking.com and a large recipe website, they both bombed though


12-29-2011 10:45 AM #4 polishedturd (Member)

Your lander is 404 right now.


12-29-2011 11:02 AM #5 presfox (Member)

Reuploading, hould work again in a min

EDIT: Works again


12-29-2011 12:05 PM #6 polarbacon (Moderator)

well for starters the entry pop gives me no reason to do anything...and prob scares most people away right off the bat...

something more like "You've Been Selected...etc"

and btw...running entry pops like that is a good way to get your account canned...


12-29-2011 12:13 PM #7 presfox (Member)

hmm, true, ill get it off


12-29-2011 04:43 PM #8 getzlaf15 (Member)

Why do you have the stupid ,- crap on the top line and the gift card?


Personally I would change the $1000 from the yellow/gold/whatever color that is to something else.


12-29-2011 09:45 PM #9 polishedturd (Member)

Either the girl is tiny, or that's one huuuuge gift card. Kinda off-putting, draws attention from the rest of the ad, or maybe it's just me


12-30-2011 09:07 PM #10 alpha matt (Member)

I have to agree with Polishedturd..the LP is not that perfect also.


01-06-2012 05:28 AM #11 Kapies (Member)

Cooking...maybe you should use a picture of someone actually cooking, or cooking tools, or delicious food.
Looks very crowded.


01-06-2012 01:14 PM #12 presfox (Member)

ya, i dumped this already, my new landers are doing much better CTR wise, though they arent really profiting yet


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