Need Feedback For a Lander and Creative I Create For a Mobile CPA offer (3)
Need Feedback For a Lander and Creative I Create For a Mobile CPA offer
Hello STM,
I created landing page using Leadpages and creative using Canva for a Mobile CPA spanish offer. It's about multimedia content (video streaming/music and game).
Traffic source: Facebook
Please let me you know what do you think 
Banner:
Landing Page:
Link: https://haadmomo.lpages.co/spainoffers/
Thanks again!
How does the banner perform? Would be a bit strange to open a thread without any results, so people shoot feedback before you launched it. Maybe the original you posted now already is a winner?
The banner is far from eye-catching - you need to find an image that can capture people's attention in a fraction of a second.
Try using red instead of green - FB's theme is white+blue so the warm colors like red and orange will stand out more.
As for the lander:
-Same advice for the image - needs to be eye-catching. Also, since it's the same image as what's on the banner, there's no need to take up the entire screen with the image.
-Make text shorter / more concise - especially the headline. People have short attention spans. The headline needs to be short and powerful.
-Try to make the entire lander fit on the screen - or at least put the most important content above the fold. Most people will be too lazy too scroll down. Browserstack will help by showing how your lander will look on different mobile devices.
-Put some faces to the testimonials. This site may help:
https://randomuser.me/photos
If I were you, I would focus on coming up with a powerful image and headline first and foremost - these are what will make/break your campaign.
P.S. Would you mind revealing what type of offer this is?
Amy
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