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I think My Content Sucks. Need Expert Copywriter for review (5)


07-15-2017 08:04 AM #1 abrarsm (Member)
I think My Content Sucks. Need Expert Copywriter for review

Hey, guys, i am new to AM and I feel like my content really really sucks. It's just gibberish shit frankly speaking.


My Main keyword is hovering between page 3 and 4.


Please have a look at carwaxpro.com and lemme know what you think.


07-15-2017 05:39 PM #2 lospollos (Member)

Maybe you should hire a native english speaker on fiverr or something to go over this for you. Just off the bat your title is goofed - you used indefinite article "a" and you needed to use the definite article "the" instead.


07-15-2017 06:40 PM #3 abrarsm (Member)

That's right. Content is written by my team tho and yeah I just noticed that. I am sure there are a ton of mistakes in content
and just wanted to get others opinion if it was really gibberish. Thanks for the heads-up.


07-05-2018 06:17 PM #4 DrewEricWhitman (Member)

Aside from English issues, a well-designed masthead would help lend credibility your otherwise generic-looking page. Add a logo for the appearance of more establishment and stability. Design supports good copy. Good copy without good design can work, but the two together can be magic. You don't want to give the impression that your page was cranked out by a guy in his kitchen or bedroom. Most of your audience reads top to bottom, left to right. The top of your page is critical. That's where the headline naturally goes. A buying guide should look like just that... something that's trusted and credible. And typically businesses that are trusted and credible have names. Give one to your buying guide. Then get your masthead designed. You want consumers to have at least an unconscious impression the second they land on your page, "This looks trustworthy and worth my time to read."


07-05-2018 07:25 PM #5 cmdeal (Veteran Member)

Haha, well you can't get any more expert of a copywriter than Drew Eric Whitman, who literally wrote the book on direct response copywriting.


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