Anyone want to critique my lander? (9)
Looking for some general feedback on this sweeps LP I just created, just turning my hand to sweeps so want to know what you guys think...
Its X factor final night here in UK hence the theme and this was run on mobile (it does display correctly on mobile devices). Just sent it several thousand RON pops and got just 18 clicks through to offer (offer now de-activated for this purpose).
Live link: http://www.pushmobile.info/xfactorquizstart
Look forward to your feedback...
It doesn't display correctly on my Galaxy S4; the text "Simply answer the 3 questions correctly and you could be a winner!" cannot be seen.
Make use of a javascript alert when the user hits the landing page, it really helps CTR.
I also couldn't click-through to any offer after completing the quiz.
Thanks, didn't realise all the text wasn't all displaying correctly. Entry pop will be added on next test then, wasn't sure if making 2 java alerts was too much initially.
I didi de-link the offer for the sake of the exercise hence why nothing happening.
Really appreciate your comments!
Is there a reason why you iframed the questions? I could see how a user would bounce if their fat fingers somehow made the question go out of the framed area.
Thanks Conrad, used I frame for questions so that there is no main page reload in between questions, bit of a crude way of doing it I guess.
Good point about the scrolling in the iframe, hadn't though of that, will have to limit the iframe size. I tested it on my iPhone but thinking about it the iPhone doesn't support iframe scrolling so it's not noticeable, will test on the wife's S5 also.
Out of interest what emulator did you use for the screenshot?
You can use a script so that the questions scroll on after answering, it doesn't require reloading. PM me your Skype and I'll send you an old question lander you might be able to use to cobble together the js you need.
Sweet! pm sent...
The lander looks pretty spammy and flashy, which means its good.
As a point of improvement, I would suggest to include a picture of the iphone6 + some bullet points about why the iphone6 is an amazing phone
Here below you can see an example of a lander for a comparable offer.
I would also suggest to implement a service like http://theparkingplace.com which can help you to monetize impressions/clicks coming from other countries than the ones accepted by your advertiser
Thanks Chris, I did wonder about the lack of prize image - will implement it now on the template.
Was trying to keep things clean and easy to read but think I missed out a few vitals.
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