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Mission Appollo : Going to the Moon with sweepstakes (6)

08-02-2015 02:25 PM #1 mapstar (Member)

Hey man. I'm just starting out in sweeps too.. Add me on skype if you use it: yothisisnetr

08-02-2015 05:29 PM #2 franco12 (Member)

Bon chance!

08-02-2015 05:55 PM #3 cmdeal (Veteran Member)

I didn't quite understand. Are you French?

There are some embarrassing French spelling and grammatical mistakes in your ads (e.g. "peut-êtrte").

You should probably get them fixed or at least run your ad copy through a spellchecker.

08-02-2015 06:50 PM #4 bitadd (Member)

I don’t have any excuse, I am a French native.

Thanks, I will correct these mistakes, especially for the gift banner.

Concerning the landing page (ripped), I didn’t modify the text for the moment. I was thinking to test it first as a control variable.

But, obviously proper French will have a greater impact.

I will upload the modified version soon.

08-04-2015 07:20 AM #5 vortex (Senior Moderator)

Nice start! Only one suggestion: Banner text looks small and hard to read. Try to make the font bigger and shorten the text for future banner versions and split-test those.

Amy

08-14-2015 07:47 AM #6 delightmax (Member)

Did allow Go2mobi this lander that you post? I think this lander is a misleading and its prohibited on many exchanges.

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