Need Landing Page advice/criticism on my first campaign (6)
Hi guys,
I'm trying to work my way up to running a 30 day challenge like iwanturcoins has done in the Follow Along section, but I wanted to set up and run one campaign first so that I could get all the hosting, cpvlab type stuff worked out first because I have never done any of this before.
Anyway, I got all that stuff figured out and put up a campaign for RichMen, and I'm having awful luck with my landing pages. I can't seem to get anything to go above 2.00% CTR even on highly targeted URL targets. I keep seeing the MODs saying to shoot for 10% CTR minimum, and I'm feeling pretty discouraged at my performance so far, so I'm reaching out here.
Here are the 3 best variations that I have tried so far:
Var 1:
Var 2:
Var 3:
Of those three, Var 3 has done the best by starting out around 6.5% before gradually dropping back down below 2.00%.
I'm throwing myself on the mercy of the forum, please go ahead and rip my LP creation skills to pieces. I really don't know what else to try.
I'm not sure if its my LPs or if the RichMen offer is just played out at this point, or if its the type of target URLs Im choosing, so I'm hoping some advice from here will help me narrow it down.
*EDIT*
Should state that my traffic source is PPV via Lead Impact and all of these landers have received 400 or so pops each.
Thanks,
JC
First off, too much text and I have no idea but it looks like your font is different for each line of text. Stick with one main font and use that... its really hard to read it all and i get distracted with all the colors for each line of text..
my 2 cents.
Also are you adding graphics like animated gifs and maybe sound? Another thing is if your bidding on dating there are a ton of targets and the most obvious ones may not really be the best.. 
Var 1 and 2 button is too low - they may not see it until they scroll if popup is 800x600. The last variation, since it did well, i would try putting the red headline on top and align the text to the right, push the image up a bit more to align it nicely. And maybe the button flash / blink? That is all I can think of atm.
Thanks guys I'm trying out your suggestions.
Anyone else have any tips they could send my way?
On Var1:
- Your primary heading "Start meeting hot successful Guys todays" is tough to read. I'd take it out completely and add some fake navigation items there.
- Instead of just saying "Wealthy Men online NOW" reiterate that message with some online status symbols on the user avatars. Also try throwing in a few pictures of guys displaying their wealth (for example driving a lambo).
- Instead of Sign Up Now on your call to action try using "Start Your Search"
- Instead of 3 Day Limited Time offer say "Free for Today Only!"
- Let the girls know why female visitors join completely free today only.... because there are too many rich guys on the site!
- Get rid of the STOP sign, it has negative connotations.
- I'd also try a green Call to Action instead of Red. This would have to be tested, but generally green generates a better response.
- Clean up the page and use only extremely high quality images (nothing even close to pixilated). These are sugar daddies, they should have access to sick cameras.
Hope it helps! Good luck with the campaign!
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