Hey all,
Just started a mobile campaign and would love to have some suggestions, critiques and helpful advice. Hoping to absorb as much knowledge and learn from this campaign as much as possible. I'll share all my banners, landers and stats because I want to learn what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong. So thanks for taking the time to read this and I'm looking forward to hearing how I can improve.
Offer: Android Tools & Antivirus
Payout: $1
Country: Malaysia
Traffic Source: Decisive
Angles
My original plan was to use a "low memory" type of lander for this campaign. The angles would be dealing with "phone speed" and "phone memory". However, the lander I had intended to use was not approved by the advertiser. They said it looked too much like a system message and could be misleading. In retrospective now, I think I should have came up with more original angles than "phone speed" and "phone memory", which both have been overused. My banners were mostly finished, so I had to whip up a different lander to use for this campaign. Something a little more generic. I'm not sure if that's where I should have stopped and just redo the whole campaign. Perhaps I was a little too eager to start the campaign 
Banners Used










Landers Used
Link >>> Fix Phone
I have 2 CTA's in this lander because I wanted to have a CTA above fold.. I figured, for some people that want more information, they might scroll and see some of the benefits/features of the app and may then decide to click on the second CTA.
Link >>> Winner
Inspired from BBrock32's survey lander, so thank you!
Stats





My Take On Things So Far
From the
I'm wondering if I should continue working on this particular angle and culling placements, changing banners and such? I have a feeling I might do better by spending time to come up with an more original angle to work this offer. Thanks for taking the time to read this follow along and I would greatly appreciate some criticisms on what I may be doing wrong or maybe even what you think I am doing right 
The banners are pretty and so are the landers. However, these kind of apps work best when you scare the people, otherwise they simply don't get it why they need these apps.
Also try ugly banners, they worked better consistently in my tests.
I think you are being smart by showing the full details of the campaign when you are starting out, as this will allow people to give you a lot better feedback!
Great start mate!
But I already see one glaring mistake.
You are targeting Malaysia, but your creatives and landers are in English? Only 20% of Malaysians speak English. It's highlighted by your super low lander CTRs. You've received around 1000 clicks, but only around 55 have got through to the offer. That's where your biggest leak is at the moment.
I'd also advise you to set up a direct linking campaign along side these landing page campaigns. You will be able to generate data a lot faster around what apps, sites and carriers to kill off.
On Decisive, Grindr definitely destroys your budget fast, as well as 6tag, 6snap and Bubble Bug.
Wow, your creatives are beautiful 
Thank you everyone for their insight and advice.
As per the suggestions, I will be making the following changes:
Nice banners!
And yep, as Tāne Kākāriki (Mr Green) said, you absolutely need to translate those banners.
Always know your audience well.
Language is perhaps the most important thing you have to be aware of. You would look quite foolish advertising to Brazilians in Spanish
Did Advertiser or traffic source disallow your landers/ads?
Ads look awesome, but translate that sh**!
Regardless of how these campaigns turn out, you will always be able to get a job designing fresh looking mobile banners!
Looking forward to your next update!
Your action plan looks very sound - if you don't start seeing conversions after all that (particularly the direct link step) then it may be time to look at the offer and whether it's a good one.
Can you split-test a different but similar offer, or alternatively the same offer on another network?
Hi guys,
Just a quick update. I have translated all banners and landers to Malay now. Waiting for AM to approve my updated "memory low" lander, however it seems like I won't be hearing back from them until after the weekend.
I've also created a few "ugly" banners. I picked 3 of my worst performing banners, and 1 of my best performing banners and created an ugly version of those. I also created an alternative banner with same copy for my 2nd best performing creative.
Ugly Banners:




Alternative Banner:

Aside from that, I have revised the better performing lander and made it easier to read, and added some slight changes. It also does a device call out now, saying "Fix these problems on your DEVICE". I'll be split testing that along with the previous landers.
Revised Lander
Link >>> Fix Phone Revised
Angle Revision
I did some research and have found some statistics on mobile users in Malaysia. With the new info on hand, I have come up with a new angle that still deals with phone performance but in a slight twist that I hope will be more relevant to the majority of users in Malaysia. I will spend time working on this new angle over the course of the next few days. In the meantime, all creatives are pending approval on Decisive and I will update with new stats when I've had a chance to properly test the new translated campaign.
@redrummr - It was the advertiser that rejected the "memory low" lander. They claim it looked too much like a system UI and would mislead users. They also mentioned I can cast doubt in users but cannot say something definite that is not true. Hence I have revised the lander and removed the "Your device has 7% memory left" and "Your performance has been reduced by 50%".
@caurmen - I think a similar offer would be 360 Mobile Security but I believe that offer has been put on paused. I will try asking my AM if there are similar offers or ask an AM from a different network if they have something similar for me to test. Thanks for the advice.
Haha this is your ugly banners??
Rich man problems.... 
Maybe this will inspire your ugly creativity skills. The-Worst-Case-Study-Ever.
Hey guys,
Time for an update on how those translated banners and landers performed. They all performed better.. unfortunately the results were still very poor.
Campaign Stats








My Take On Things On This Run
The CTR's for the banners and landers have all shown a great improvement! I will never forget to translate my creatives to the appropriate language from now on
However, conversions are minimal. Throughout the day or two of testing, I had continually culled placements from sites and apps. I'm guessing the lack of conversions can be attributed to the angle itself? I would love to split test a similar offer but my AM said they do not have any similar at the moment.
The advertisers also rejected my revised "memory low" lander. I'm guessing for this particular advertiser, I can not mimic ANY system like lander at all. I think that makes it hard to sell a system utility tool without the scare factor.
From the results, I'm assuming I should be dropping this angle all together?
I have been working on a slightly different angle for this offer. One I hope is more relevant to the users. I am just waiting for approval for my creatives and will be running a test on the new angle. For the next update, I will explain my reasons of why I chose the particular angle and as always, show the banners and landers that I have used. Here's hoping that the new angle will prove to be more successful than the last one.
you might want to try another advertising network which can be found here by iamattila >>> http://stmforum.com/forum/showthread...Sources-By-GEO
switching the advertising network alone raised my conversions by more than 100%, its not about the profit now, its about proper testing, having more conversions helps to tell u faster which banner is better. CTR is a intermediate metric, i used to look at it alot until i had one campaign that was having a CTR 3-5x lower than the rest but yet converting better, because the ad was targeted and those who clicked were much more interested in installing. which means again conversions is the main thing we should look at and on decisive thats just hard to get when everyone is bidding there. the same ad that got around 10-15 conversions with 50 spent on decisive got me around 30 conversions on another network.
you might want to throw in some animations on photoshop, just add time frames below and test it out, its 3 loops on decisive if u still decide to use it.
u can do some more research on other countries like canada south africa etc, they have differeny funny ads that i ripped and converted into english and apparently its doing better than those i took that were originally in english in the more popular countries
You are spending way too much energy on your creatives. Start looking at placements and cut non converters and poor performers.
Your creatives are very "smart" but I would STRONGLY suggest you try some different banners (they are all very similar atm). Simple "Image + Text + call to action" never disappoints.
Google user agent switcher or user agent spoofer and then visit the sites that are getting you traffic on decisive
Hey guys,
This will be a longer post.
First of all, thank you deondup for your advice. Going forward, I will create simpler banners to start and see if the angle / copy is effective. If the angle looks promising, I will then spend more time on the creatives and see if I can improve my CTR's and conversions. It would definitely save me a lot of time initially and allow me to put more copies to the test. I do see that deondup is correct when he said a lot of my banners look too similar, so I really have to work on using different variations later. Advice noted! 
New Angle Put To The Test
So I did do some research on Malaysia last week. In my research, I found a study that states that 74% of mobile users in Malaysia play games on their phones. (Source) I figured I should try the offer with a game performance perspective. Here are the copies I brainstormed on this angle.
"My game is always crashing"
- Games always crashing/freezing? Run a memory cleaner
- Memory cleaner fixes crashing games!
- Stop games from crashing! Clean your android's memory
- Hate when games freeze up? Your Android memory is too low
"I can't run certain games"
- Run more games on your mobile.
- Need more memory to play games? Free memory now
- Can't load a game? You need to clean your Android's memory
- Low memory affecting your games? Fix your phone now
"Games are slow"
- Games running slower? Your Android needs a memory clean
- Your games will run smoother after a memory clean. Start now
- Find out how to speed up your slow games
- This App can help you load games faster
- You can load your games faster! Here's how..
- Hate laggy games?
"Games drain my battery"
- Fix your phone so games don't drain your battery fast
- Games draining your battery fast? Our app can help
- Make your battery last longer during gaming
- Play games longer with your phone. Fix your battery
"No space for games"
- No more space for games? Clean your android
- Games taking up too much space? Clean out junk files from your android
Banners Created For This Angle
Due to time constraints this week, I was not able to create banners for all the copies. But below are the banners I managed to create and put to the test.

"Can't load a game? You need to clean your Android's memory. Fix Your Phone Now"

"Don't cry.. Memory cleaner fixes crashing games! Clean Memory Now"

"Fix your phone so games don't drain your battery fast"

"Need more memory to play games? Free memory now"

"Games always crashing? Run memory cleaner now"

"Games draining your battery fast? Fix your phone"

"Hate when games freeze up? Your Android memory is too low. Clean memory now"

"Low memory affecting your games? Fix your phone now"

"Make your battery last longer during gaming. Fix your phone"

"Run more games on your mobile. Clean Android memory"
Lander Created For This Angle
The lander I created was supposed to be relatively short but for some reason, when everything got translated, the sentences became super long.
LINK >>> Games








I don't see you doing anything obviously wrong in terms of how you are approaching things.
In fact, I think you are doing a lot of things right.
You are good and fast with your banner designs, and you at least have gotten some (albeit small number of) conversions, so it seems like your tracking is set up properly.
At this stage, I would probably test out a different traffic source or a different offer. You still have plenty of budget left.
I completely agree with cmdeal. You're doing a lot of things right, which strongly implies that the problem here isn't you.
I'd suggest testing a different offer, or better yet a lot of different offers one after another!
And of course, remember to split-test some of your traffic with direct-linked, i.e. have say 80% going to the lander(s).
You never know - sometimes landers don't perform as well.
Hi guys,
Just in case some people were wondering, I tried a different traffic source and the stats were not promising. So I have decided to drop this offer and focus on another offer.
Stats from affiliate network

Thank you to everyone for your great advice. I've learnt a lot on this campaign and can't wait to put this knowledge to use on my next campaign. Also a big thanks to Mr. Green for offering to help me with some of my testing for this campaign.
Yes try a few offers ... you will definitely get there.

Hey guys, I'm back!
It's been a while since my last post but I haven't been slacking! I was testing different offers and think I have finally found a promising offer. I have been trying different landers and banners the last week for this offer. Here are my stats so far:
Offer: Dolphin Browser
Payout: Initially $0.42, now dropped to $0.40
Country: Malaysia
Traffic Source: Tried multiple traffic sources.
Traffic Source #1: Decisive
I started this offer initially on Decisive. I did the usual 4 campaigns split into Wifi site, Wifi app, Carrier site and Carrier app. I'll simplify the stats here
| Campaign | Wins | Clicks (CTR%) | Conversions | CPC | CPA |
| Carrier Site | 37,381 | 374 (1.13%) | 2 | $0.03 | $5.24 |
| Carrier App | 60,069 | 292 (0.55%) | 2 | $0.06 | $8.15 |
| Wifi Site | 158,091 | 2,386 (1.72%) | 22 | $0.02 | $1.89 |
| Wifi App | 120,750 | 992 (0.89%) | 16 | $0.03 | $2.12 |
| Wifi App (Fiverr) | 26,958 | 246 (0.96%) | 1 | $0.03 | $7.84 |
| Wifi Site (Fiverr) | 50,899 | 918 (2.06%) | 9 | $0.02 | $1.67 |
| Campaign | Exposure | Clicks (CTR%) | Conversions | CPC | CPA |
| Stop | 161,941 | 1,342 (0.83%) | 14 | $0.01 | $0.91 |
| Dizzy | 83,431 | 603 (0.72%) | 3 | $0.01 | $2.01 |
| Film | 30,971 | 163 (0.53%) | 2 | $0.01 | $0.82 |
| Movie Clip | 337,074 | 2,699 (0.80%) | 35 | $0.01 | $0.77 |


Oh I forgot to ask, I know I should be split testing the offer itself from different networks. The offer is also available on:
F5Media - $0.24
Clickdealer - $0.30
The payout seems so much lower than the $0.40 from Avazu at the moment. Should I still do a split test despite the huge gap in payout?
Yes, split test.
Payout is only half of the matter. Conversion rate is the other. The same offer at F5 may convert 60% better for example - for whatever reason. Payout bumps are generally possible as well.
Data looks good so far, I would get more though before day parting. When you do have a bit more, then yes consider pausing/resuming. Remember to adjust for time zones!
You can optimise by publisher IDs on BuzzCity but I believe they make a big idiotic song and dance about it instead of just giving it to you - docs.buzzcity.net/wiki/PubID_-_For_Advertisers
hi team udon!
regarding payout differences, you should definitely point them out to your AM to try to get a bump. its pretty easy and i highly suggest you do it for all offers you try. every cent counts on these low payout apps. $0.01 bump on a $0.24 payout would be worth 4% of revenue! thats a hell lot!
once u get the bump, split test like zeno says. some aff networks can pay you higher to please you but scrub your leads on the side! every little edge counts! good luck!
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Thanks for the great advice guys! I'll be split testing the offers really soon.
On a very positive note, one of my new landers produced a positive ROI! +22% yesterday and +15% today so far. Although revenue is less than $1, I have never seen green ROI before so I'm super excited
.. Can't wait to optimize this campaign even more and produce better results. I'll report back once I have more data.
Team udon, great thread. I'm working on a similar offer for uc web browser in Vietnam . Also having issues with translators. Tried 3 and all come up with different translations for the same text. Not sure which one to pick. Question on angles - it sounds like you're using something along the lanes of movies slow or internet slow. I've used Facebook slow and it is not producing the results I expected. How did you go about picking angles? I've shortlisted to about 5 angles. Should I narrow it down to 2 or test all 5?
Hey team udon and other STMers, what's your approach for creating banners quickly. I decided to create some type of a system where i created 3 folders for each of the layers in PSD.
Folder 1 - all background images.
Folder 2 - icons, cartoon characters, pictures.
Folder 3 - text in different font sizes and colors.
I have all the background images open in PS and mix and match different variations. What's your take on it?
Thank you!
Honestly, my approach to creating banners is pretty damn unsystematic.
Come up with idea -> mash together in Photoshop -> move on to next idea -> repeat.
I try to avoid templates until I know a traffic source quite well, because I find staying unsystematic means I come up with more original ideas. Sometimes even screwing up generates more ideas - mess up and use the wrong font, then think "hey, actually, that could work...".
Once I have a reliable, converting template, then layer masks and automated export scripts are my friends.
I have layer styles and that's about it.
I agree with Caurmen... for the types of ads I do, creativity is paramount and templates wouldn't help me too much.
For mobile banners I can see them being useful tho.
Hey team udon, great work! 
How are you doing these days? I'd like to see an update on your progress!
I will be going the same journey as you and judging by the awesome tips from experienced members, I'll also go transparent with all my campaign details 
Just want to browse this awesome forum and read a bit more before I jump into buying data as I have only 1/5th of your investment available 
Hey guys,
I've been letting the campaign run the last few days and trying to gather more data and also testing out new landers. I'm not sure what to really make of the data at this point. Some days I see a lander performing well and think "Oh this is the keeper" and marking down the ones I plan to eliminate, then the next day the stats are reversed. Would anyone be able to help me make sense of my stats and give me some advice on how I should proceed (Aside from more testing of course).
Yesterday's Stats

Some basic explanations of my landers:
| Visits | Clicks | Conversions | Revenue | Cost | Profit | CTR | CR | ROI | EPC |
| 1,694 | 407 | 39 | $15.60 | $16.94 | ($1.34) | 24.03% | 9.58% | -7.91% | $0.04 |

| Visits | Clicks | Conversions | Revenue | Cost | Profit | CTR | CR | ROI | EPC |
| 1,253 | 287 | 26 | $10.12 | $12.53 | ($2.41) | 22.91% | 9.06% | -19.23% | $0.04 |


| Visits | Clicks | Conversions | Revenue | Cost | Profit | CTR | CR | ROI | EPC |
| 5,167 | 1,204 | 116 | $45.02 | $51.67 | ($6.65) | 23.30% | 9.63% | -12.87% | $0.04 |

The kind of variation you are seeing is likely due to other variables like placements, the day of the week and connectivity.
Look at your data other than landing page and offer.
Did specific placements have volume each day and always do well? The variation can then be attributed to the aggregate effect of all the other placements.
Crap, just realised this is BuzzCity. Did you manage to get PubID passing? Or no go right now? You may still be able to see outliers in your data, e.g. specific phone models, carriers, OS, etc.
Good call on the offer across various networks. It's looking most promising with Avazu, but you're right, you don't have enough data yet -

hey team udon! great job on the split testing networks, AVAZU is blowing the rest out of the water - that's freakin sweet
u are so close to making this bank .. here's further tips my friends!!
1) hit up avazu, yeahmobi, appflood, clickdealer - see what other browser offers they got
2) dump the links add em to volume, w/e - PREP it
3) add em in your split test against dolphin... and you might be surprised... maybe UC Browser, maybe Baidu Browser, maybe just Opera Mini might win - you won't know till you try.. so try 
Hey guys,
Thanks for the insight!
@Zeno - After some thought, I think I might want to switch to a different traffic source. The offer has performed much better at Buzzcity because of the cheaper CPC than Decisive, but the requirements I have to meet to be able to use the PUBID feature might be too much. Without the ability to cull certain placements, I think I am severely limiting my campaign. It's like competing in a car race with 3 wheels instead of 4, and while I can still win, I am making it that much harder for myself. I really should be using all the options I can to optimize my campaigns.
@Caurmen - Thanks for the information. (*Edited*.. Found the calculator in your previous post, can't believe I missed it)
@iAmAttila - Thanks for the input. I will definitely give your advice a try. At this point most of the landing pages I am testing are quite generic and can work with pretty much any browser. I'm wondering if I should create specific landers that showcase screenshots, or use similar colors/themes and/or icons of the browsers I'm promoting? (Although I think I already know the answer to that one lol... "Always be testing!")
Good call on moving from BuzzCity.
The traffic is a waste of time if you can't optimise it to profit because of barriers on their end.