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Please critique my lander! (ipad pin submit) (6)

03-09-2013 05:55 AM #1 akrtw1 (Member)
Please critique my lander! (ipad pin submit)

Hey guys!

I have found that there's little information about mobile landing pages. So I decided to start a thread about it myself. I have created a mobile lp. A very simple/ugly one.

Would like to know what you guys think and how can I improve it!

Note: I cannot use survey style. Advertiser restricted.



Thanks!

03-10-2013 04:02 AM #2 jtgjustin (Member)

What offer is this? Are you allowed to ask them questions to see if they "qualify"?

03-10-2013 07:06 AM #3 akrtw1 (Member)

I will have to ask my AM about it. It said "no survey traffic" allowed. Thanks for the suggestion!

03-10-2013 06:14 PM #4 joejoechen (Member)

Your lander is supposed to "pre-sell" the offer, make it interactive, real, story, questionaire, survey, games, etc.. not just telling them that they can win an ipadr.. which is exactly what the offer lander already doing.. you just gonna burn money running it.

03-12-2013 03:20 PM #5 miket (Member)

The idea behind using a landing page is to pre-sell or build engagement. At the moment, yours is basically a clone of the offer page.

You want to come up with some kind of angle or twist to make yours stand out, build user engagement, and make them want to complete the offer.

03-18-2013 09:46 AM #6 localdentist (Member)

Quote Originally Posted by miket View Post
The idea behind using a landing page is to pre-sell or build engagement. At the moment, yours is basically a clone of the offer page.

You want to come up with some kind of angle or twist to make yours stand out, build user engagement, and make them want to complete the offer.
Any examples of this?

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